Wednesday, February 20, 2013

on knights and castles

I wrote this a couple years ago. Tell me what you think!

A Knight's Story

Once upon a time there was a knight. The knight's name was John. John lived in the castle with the king, the queen and the princess named Janet.

One day while the king and queen were going to town, the castle was attacked by a dragon. John fought the dragon and killed it. Then John sent a servant to get the king and queen. After that, the princess was kidnapped! John rode to the country to look for her.

Janet was captured by the Dark Droid! The Dark Droid was an evil creature. Of course John did not know that the Dark Droid had captured Janet.

The Dark Droid always left clues of where he was when he kidnapped someone. So John followed the clue and found Janet. They ran into the Dark Droid on the way out. He tried to stop them, but John pushed him out of the way. Then John and Janet got married and lived happily ever after.

~ Wesley

4 comments:

  1. I like that John keeps facing danger and overcomes. What a brave character!

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  2. We enjoyed this story. It was easy to follow & kept us interested the whole story! Grandma & Grandpa

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  3. Joe says, "It is perfect and it's the best." Josh wants to know more about the Dark Droid.

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  4. Nice short story, you did a good job of introducing your main character and I was anxious to know what was going to happen next.

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