Wednesday, February 20, 2013

on poetry ~ "Heart"

I wrote this last year. Say what you think!

Heart

My heart
is smart
and tart.

~ Halle

5 comments:

  1. This is such a fun poem. It is straight to the point!

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  2. Simple, direct and honest. That sounds like the Halle I know and love. Looking forward to reading more of your stories and poems.

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  3. I love this. Smart and tart! A great combination.

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  4. Josh says, "Awesome! It sounds like a great poem!" Josh says that if he were describing Halle's heart he would say that it was big and beautiful!

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Be kind! As these are primarily kids' creative works - and many are works-in-progress - please keep comments POSITIVE! :) Consider what you liked, what you learned and what inspires you. Thanks!